I don't really like the whole layout of the beat you used, the snare is a bit too weak. I like your bass though
i think the kick needed to be replaced with one that had a bit more bass to it but i was just lazy to look lol and i guess the snare sounded like that because of the volume adjustment. Thanks for the comment tho lol
idk . its still the same shitt.. thanks for your opinion tho lol. at least u aint lie and say it was goood