Good work there, but I usually point out the negatives. - For some reason the beginning sounded like the it was skipping beats (something with the loop) - You should get a better vocal - The main drop wasn't that great It was a good mix, but the original remains better.
Totally off beat from 1:05-1:28. Try working on getting your beats matched and mastering a little better. Everything takes time. Good attempt though!
